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Complain teenagers let their dogs run wildly

I am writing this letter on behalf of some society members to complain about teenagers who let their dogs run in a way which is causing danger in society. Yesterday evening my daughter was playing outside suddenly a dog was coming very fast from the B block with his owner. The dog was about to hit my daughter fortunately, I pushed her towards the other side of the ground. Is not only one incident daily something is going on due to these adolescence. We complained their parent but I think they are more concerned about their kids entertainment instead of people safety. There are four youngsters who does this in appropriate act just for the fun and to tease their pet dog. Kindly take action against this activity as you are the secretary of this area. I think you should send a notice to the parents so that they could and some strictness on their children. Yours sincerely,

I am writing this letter on behalf of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 society members to complain about This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 their dogs run in a way which is causing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardrisk
danger
 in society.

Yesterday evening my daughter was playing outside suddenly
 a dog was coming This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 from the B block with his owner. The dog was about to hit my daughter fortunately
, I pushed her towards the other side of the ground. Is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one incident daily something is going on due to ‘These’ does not seem to match the singular noun ‘adolescence’. Did you mean “this adolescence” or “these adolescences”?this adolescencethese adolescences
these adolescence
.

We complained their parent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 they are more concerned about their kids entertainment instead
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 safety. There are four youngsters who Did you mean “do”? Alternatively, check whether the singular of ‘youngsters’ should be used.do
does
 this in appropriate act This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 for the fun and to tease their pet dog.

Kindly take action against this activity as you are the secretary of this area. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a notice to the parents This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they could and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 strictness on their children.

Yours sincerely
, 