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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/ She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. Describe some possible disadvantages. Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

Dear Mark, It has been a while since we last met. I had a really great time with your cousins at your farm house. Since you have been thinking to go for a camping holiday this summer, I wanted to share my experiences as this is your first experience. I think you would really enjoy this camping trip, especially the forest and the natural surroundings. I am aware of the fact that you love being around nature and this shall hence be one of the most memorable experiences ever. Having said that, camping does have its own challenges. Like the cold chilly nights, threat of wild bears and other animals, mosquitoes, bugs etc. It is important to stay prepared for any adversaries. I have my entrance exams scheduled this summer, else I would have loved to join you. Do send me pictures and look forward to see you soon. Lots of love, John
Dear Mark,

It has been a while since we last met. I had a
really
great time with your cousins at your farm
house
.

Since you have been thinking to go for a camping holiday this summer, I wanted to share my experiences as this is your
first
experience.

I
think
you would
really
enjoy this camping trip,
especially
the forest and the natural surroundings. I am aware of the fact that you
love
being around nature and this shall
hence
be one of the most memorable experiences ever.

Having said that, camping does have its
own
challenges. Like the
cold
chilly nights, threat of wild bears and other animals, mosquitoes, bugs etc. It is
important
to stay prepared for any adversaries.

I have my entrance exams scheduled this summer, else I would have
loved
to
join
you. Do
send
me pictures and look forward to
see
you
soon
.

Lots of
love
,

John
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/ She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. Describe some possible disadvantages. Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
152 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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