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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Dear sir or madam, I am writing this letter to express my concern regarding a recent plan to develop a shopping centre near Woodland Roads. I am a resident at Nookah Livings, which is a guarded townhouse near the proposed construction site. Last week, all residents at Nookah Livings were sent a letter by our residential management team regarding the proposed construction plan. It is to my concern that the construction site chosen is near the public park as children are frequently utilizing the facility despite being accompanied by their parents. This is because the close proximity of the park to the construction area would likely result in a higher probability for the occurrence of accidents resulting in a higher risk for residents around the area. Kindly provide a copy of the risk assessment plan for the project so that our residential management team are able to review and provide an update to residents who are deeply concerned by the project. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Michael Jorde

Dear sir or madam,

I am writing this letter to express my concern regarding a recent plan to develop a shopping Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.center
centre
 near Woodland Roads.

I am a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
resident
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Nookah
 Livings, which is a guarded townhouse near the proposed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
 site. Last week, all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
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 Livings were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 a letter by our residential management team regarding the proposed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
 plan.

It is to my concern that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
 site chosen is near the public park as children are frequently
 utilizing the facility despite being accompanied
 by their parents. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the Consider using “proximity”.proximity
close proximity
 of the park to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
 area would likely result in a higher probability for the occurrence of accidents resulting in a higher This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
 around the area.

Kindly provide a copy of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 assessment plan for the project This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that our residential management team are able to review and provide an update to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
 who are deeply
 concerned by the project.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
,

Michael Possible spelling mistake found.JorgeHordeJordi
Jorde