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write a letter to the shop and ask things you want or weather they will be able to order them.Ask what the prices are and to hold the goods for you are and how long they will be able

Dear Mr. Jay, I am Monal Wurma residential of Hillmart street. Yesterday, when I back from my office I received a broucher of your store at my door step. I looked at it and impressed by the prices, offers and the varities you mentioned in it. Actually Iam intrested in buying Refrigerator JM-679 of Dawalance company which were only 2 left as per the newsletter. Will u please reserve this for me or if sold out can you arrange from any other branch of your store. The second thing I need is Nikai Smart t. v. which is on 20% discount. I will be very gratefull to you if you send me the details of these models along with prices and furthur offer on them if any and also let me know about the timings of delivery as well. I am going to out of station on my business tour for 15 days is it possible that you reserve the two items for me and let them in the store house. I will pick them when I will be back. Thanks
Dear Mr. Jay,

I am Monal Wurma residential of Hillmart street. Yesterday, when I back from my office I received a broucher of your store at my door step. I looked at it and impressed by the prices, offers and the varities you mentioned in it.

Actually Iam intrested in buying Refrigerator JM-679 of Dawalance
company
which were
only
2
left
as per the newsletter. Will u
please
reserve this for me or if sold out can you arrange from any other branch of your store. The second thing I need is Nikai Smart t. v. which is on 20% discount.

I will be
very
gratefull to you if you
send
me the
details
of these models along with prices and furthur offer on them if any and
also
let
me know about the timings of delivery
as well
. I am going to out of station on my business tour for 15 days is it possible that you reserve the two items for me and
let
them in the store
house
. I will pick them when I will be back.

Thanks
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IELTS letter write a letter to the shop and ask things you want or weather they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and to hold the goods for you are and how long they will be able

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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