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Dear Sir , I am writing this letter to infrom you abot my discountinuation from cricket course that i have joined last month because of a medical issue. As you already that i am very good at cricket , even its my father and mine dreams is that one day i will play for my nation , make them proud. Well last week while coming from the club i meet with an accident and i got my right leg fractured . i am still hospitalized becose they want to check my recovery rate . Being in that state i am not able to complete my course in this year as my doctor suggest me to take rest of atleast 3 month . so i would like to know is there any policy of refund or extenstion of course . with which i can go. I await your prompt service . Your sincerely Manjit Kaur.

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to infrom you abot my discountinuation from cricket course that i have joined last month because of a medical issue. As you already that i am very good at cricket, even its my father and mine dreams is that one day i will play for my nation, make them proud. Well last week while coming from the club i meet with an accident and i got my right leg fractured. i am still hospitalized becose they want to check my recovery rate. Being in that state i am not able to complete my course in this year as my doctor suggest me to take rest of atleast 3 month. so i would like to know is there any policy of refund or extenstion of course. with which i can go. I await your prompt service. Your sincerely Manjit Kaur. n6Vol
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to infrom you abot my discountinuation from cricket course that i have joined last month because of a medical issue. As you already that i am very good at cricket, even its my father and mine dreams is that one day i will play for my nation, make them proud. Well last week while coming from the club i meet with an accident and i got my right leg fractured. i am still hospitalized becose they want to check my recovery rate. Being in that state i am not able to complete my course in this year as my doctor suggest me to take rest of atleast 3 month. so i would like to know is there any policy of refund or extenstion of course. with which i can go. I await your prompt service. Your sincerely Manjit Kaur.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to
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infrom
you
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abot
my
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discountinuation
from cricket course that
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i
have
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joined
last month
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because
of a medical issue.

As you already that
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i
am
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very
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good
at cricket, even
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its
my father and mine dreams is that one day
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i
will play for my nation,
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make
them proud.

Well last week while coming from the club
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i
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meet
with an accident and
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i
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got
my right leg fractured.
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i
am
still
hospitalized
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becose
they want to
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check
my recovery rate. Being in that state
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i
am not able to complete my course in this year as my doctor suggest me to take rest of
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atleast
3
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month
.
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so
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i
would like to know is there any policy of refund or
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extenstion
of course
.
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with
which
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i
can go.

I await your prompt service.

Your
sincerely


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Manjit
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Kaur
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IELTS letter Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to infrom you abot my discountinuation from cricket course that i have joined last month because of a medical issue. As you already that i am very good at cricket, even its my father and mine dreams is that one day i will play for my nation, make them proud. Well last week while coming from the club i meet with an accident and i got my right leg fractured. i am still hospitalized becose they want to check my recovery rate. Being in that state i am not able to complete my course in this year as my doctor suggest me to take rest of atleast 3 month. so i would like to know is there any policy of refund or extenstion of course. with which i can go. I await your prompt service. Your sincerely Manjit Kaur.

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