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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about my discontinuation from the cricket course that I have joined your sport club in last month because of a medical issue. To begin with, I am very passionate about this game from my childhood and always wanted to represent my nation. Moreover, my father enrolled me into your course after having heard that yours is the best in town. Well, last week while returning from the club, I met with an accident and got my right leg fractured. Being still hospitalized, the doctor has advised me to take rest for at least 3 months in order to check my recovery rate. Being in that state I am not able to complete my course this year. So, I would like to know If there is any policy of refund or extension of the course with which I can go. I await your kind consideration hoping to be associated with your club until I reach my goal. Yours faithfully, Manjit Kaur.

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about my discontinuation from the cricket course that I have joined your sport club in last month because of a medical issue. To begin with, I am very passionate about this game from my childhood and always wanted to represent my nation. Moreover, my father enrolled me into your course after having heard that yours is the best in town. Well, last week while returning from the club, I met with an accident and got my right leg fractured. Being still hospitalized, the doctor has advised me to take rest for at least 3 months in order to check my recovery rate. Being in that state I am not able to complete my course this year. So, I would like to know If there is any policy of refund or extension of the course with which I can go. I await your kind consideration hoping to be associated with your club until I reach my goal. Yours faithfully, Manjit Kaur. e5RDW
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about my discontinuation from the cricket course that I have joined your sport club in last month because of a medical issue. To begin with, I am very passionate about this game from my childhood and always wanted to represent my nation. Moreover, my father enrolled me into your course after having heard that yours is the best in town. Well, last week while returning from the club, I met with an accident and got my right leg fractured. Being still hospitalized, the doctor has advised me to take rest for at least 3 months in order to check my recovery rate. Being in that state I am not able to complete my course this year. So, I would like to know If there is any policy of refund or extension of the course with which I can go. I await your kind consideration hoping to be associated with your club until I reach my goal. Yours faithfully, Manjit Kaur.
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passionate about this game from my childhood and always wanted to represent my nation.
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, my father enrolled me into your
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course
after having heard that yours is the best in town.

Well, last week while returning from the club, I met with an accident and
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got
my right leg fractured. Being
still
hospitalized, the doctor has advised me to take rest for at least 3 months in order to
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check
my recovery rate.

Being in that state I am not able to complete my
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course
this year.
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So
, I would like to know If there is any policy of refund or extension of the
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course
with which I can go.

I await your kind consideration hoping to
be associated
with your club until I reach my goal.

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about my discontinuation from the cricket course that I have joined your sport club in last month because of a medical issue. To begin with, I am very passionate about this game from my childhood and always wanted to represent my nation. Moreover, my father enrolled me into your course after having heard that yours is the best in town. Well, last week while returning from the club, I met with an accident and got my right leg fractured. Being still hospitalized, the doctor has advised me to take rest for at least 3 months in order to check my recovery rate. Being in that state I am not able to complete my course this year. So, I would like to know If there is any policy of refund or extension of the course with which I can go. I await your kind consideration hoping to be associated with your club until I reach my goal. Yours faithfully, Manjit Kaur.

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