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Write a letter to a local TV company criticising the quality of local TV programmes

Write a letter to a local TV company criticising the quality of local TV programmes b3983

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the deteriorating quality of programmes that are being telecast on your channel. I am a fan of your TV channel because of some programs and the excellent shows you broadcast most of the time. On the one hand, there are a lot of educational, entertaining, scientific and other programmes to see. and I really like television shows such as: traveling the world, the underwater world, documentary films, as well as excavations and archeology on the other side of the world. But on the other hand the number of talk-shows and reality-shows frightens me. Violence on TV influences on the people, especially on children. One more thing I would like to mention is there is too much of advertising on your channel. It would be much appreciated if you would take note of the above mentioned complaint and change the outlook of the programmes that are being telecast. I would suggest adding on some variety in the programmes by introducing comedies, cookery shows, foreign language learning programmes to make the channel more interesting. I believe that most of TV programmes have to remain educative and helpful. I am sure that this letter will not go unheeded. I sincerely look forward to better aired programmes in future. Yours faithfully, Tori Campbell

Dear Sir or Madam,

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programmes
 that are being telecast on your channel.

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because
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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shows
 you broadcast most of the time. On the one hand, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
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see
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
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 like television This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 such as: traveling the world, the underwater world, documentary films, as well
 as excavations and archeology on the other side of the world.

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But
on the other hand
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shows
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shows
 frightens me. Violence on TV influences on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, especially
 on children. One more thing I would like to mention is there is too much of advertising on your channel.

It would be much appreciated if you would take note of the above mentioned complaint and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the outlook of the Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.programs
programmes
 that are being telecast. I would suggest adding on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 variety in the Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.programs
programmes
 by introducing comedies, cookery This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
, foreign language learning Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.programs
programmes
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the channel more interesting.

I believe that Consider using "most TV" or "most of the TV".most TVmost of the TV
most of TV
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programmes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 remain educative and helpful.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am sure that this letter will not go unheeded. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
sincerely
 look forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to bettering", "to welling".to betteringto welling
to better
 aired Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.programs
programmes
Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
.

Yours faithfully
,

Tori Campbell