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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about my last visit to one of your restaurants, The Majestic, in New York city, on the 25th of March. I was in a vocation with my family, so we were extremely excited to visit all the nice places. A good friend of mine gave me an amazing feedback of The Majestic. I called the restaurant and made a reservation for 7 p. m. We arrived 10 minutes prior. I must say the entrance is beyond marvelous, it reminded me of Paris. Anyway, we were well-received by the hostess, who walked us to our table. We did not have to wait for too long. Our server was Tyler. He gave us the menu, and we ordered the special of the day. It was a medallion steak with a red wine reduction, some green Mediterranean salad, and fries for the kids. Everything was perfect. Steaks cooked perfectly, salad and fries nicely done. After, the kids tried some homemade ice cream with caramel sauce. They loved. Once we were finished with our meals, I asked for the bill. Somehow I thought it would be a fortune to pay for everything, but surprisingly it was not expensive at all. In the end, I ended up paying 25 dollars for each person, plus the service fee. To conclude my review, I can guarantee that my family and I were extremely satisfied with the service, the meal, and the experience overall. I will definitely come back to try other dishes, and recommend the restaurant to other friends. Before I forget, I would like to request some information about corporative discount. I might have a meeting next month in New York with my associates. I look forward to receive your response. Yours faithfully, Marcelo Carvalho
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you about my last visit to one of your restaurants, The Majestic, in
New York city
, on the 25th of March. I was in a vocation with my family,
so
we were
extremely
excited to visit all the nice places. A
good
friend of mine gave me an amazing feedback of The Majestic. I called the restaurant and made a reservation for 7 p. m.

We arrived 10 minutes prior. I
must
say the entrance is beyond marvelous, it reminded me of Paris. Anyway, we were well-received by the hostess, who walked us to our table. We did not
have to
wait for too long. Our server was Tyler. He gave us the menu, and we ordered the special of the day. It was a medallion steak with a red wine reduction,
some
green Mediterranean salad, and fries for the kids. Everything was perfect. Steaks cooked
perfectly
, salad and fries
nicely
done.
After
, the kids tried
some
homemade ice cream with caramel sauce. They
loved
. Once we
were finished
with our meals, I
asked for
the bill. Somehow I
thought
it would be a fortune to pay for everything,
but
surprisingly
it was not expensive at all. In the
end
, I ended up paying 25 dollars for each person, plus the service fee.

To conclude
my review, I can guarantee that my family and I were
extremely
satisfied with the service, the meal, and the experience
overall
. I will definitely
come
back to try other dishes, and recommend the restaurant to other friends.
Before
I forget, I would like to request
some
information about
corporative
discount. I might have a meeting
next
month in New York with my associates.

I look forward
to receive
your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Marcelo
Carvalho
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