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1. You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend

1. You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend NwwJq
Dear John, I hope everything is going well for all of you. I can deny that that was a wonderful time I had with you during my stay at your home. Thanks so much for your hospitality, and I appreciate everything you’ve done to entertain me and make my trip even more memorable. It was an unforgettable experience for me and most importantly I have a deep impression of the historical destinations we visited. As a history enthusiast, I am completely fascinated by the stories associated with the vestiges left at the ruins. They represent both epochs of humanity and events that humans experienced. The weekend. The knowledge gained through this trip will be my valuable materials for my actual research. Anyway, I can't wait to come and visit you guys during the next holidays, but to keep the excitement going, here are some pictures from our outing. I'm sending some of them to you via postal service, as well as a surprise gift for you.
Dear John,

I hope everything is going well for all of you. I can deny that that was a wonderful time I had with you during my stay at your home. Thanks
so
much for your hospitality, and I appreciate everything you’ve done to entertain me and
make
my trip even more memorable.

It was an unforgettable experience for me and most
importantly
I have a deep impression of the historical destinations we visited. As a history enthusiast, I am completely fascinated by the stories associated with the vestiges
left
at the ruins. They represent both epochs of humanity and
events
that humans experienced. The weekend. The knowledge gained through this trip will be my valuable materials for my actual research.

Anyway, I can't wait to
come
and visit you guys during the
next
holidays,
but
to
keep
the excitement going, here are
some
pictures from our outing. I'm sending
some
of them to you via postal service,
as well
as a surprise gift for you.
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IELTS letter 1. You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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