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Dear Ms.Tham, I just wanted to say thank you so much for trusting me to plan

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Dear Ms. Tham, I just wanted to say thank you so much for trusting me to plan acitivities for holding a green week. Even though this is the first time I have done this, I’ll try my best to get a good results. I’ve been thinking some activities like we can invite local enviromental groups to have booths at school, each students spare ten minutes during the break time every weekday at school for green activities or bring second-hand electronics to a recycling centre, …What do you think about these activities? Please help me to choose the best activities. I really want to hear your view. And once again thank you for choosing me. Regards,

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I really
 want to hear your view. And once again thank you for choosing me.

Regards, 