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Dear Ms.Tham, I just wanted to say thank you so much for trusting me to plan

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Dear Ms. Tham, I just wanted to say thank you so much for trusting me to plan acitivities for holding a green week. Even though this is the first time I have done this, I’ll try my best to get a good results. I’ve been thinking some activities like we can invite local enviromental groups to have booths at school, each students spare ten minutes during the break time every weekday at school for green activities or bring second-hand electronics to a recycling centre, …What do you think about these activities? Please help me to choose the best activities. I really want to hear your view. And once again thank you for choosing me. Regards,
Dear Ms.
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acitivities
for holding a green week.
Even though
this is the
first
time I have done this, I’ll try my best to
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get
a
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good
results. I’ve been thinking
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some
activities like we can invite local
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enviromental
groups to have booths at school, each
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students
spare ten minutes during the break time every weekday at school for green activities or bring second-hand electronics to a recycling
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What
do you
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about these activities?
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me to choose the best activities.

I
really
want to hear your view. And once again thank you for choosing me.

Regards,
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IELTS letter Dear Ms. Tham, I just wanted to say thank you so much for trusting me to plan

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  American English
4 paragraphs
115 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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