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Absence from class for two weeks

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Dear Professor Hart, I'm writing to let you know that I can't attend class for two weeks as I've had an accident and hurt my back. I'm afraid I also need to ask for an extension for next week's essay. I have medicine for the pain but I can't get up or walk around much, and the doctor said I should stay in bed and rest as much as possible. This makes reading and studying very difficult for me at the moment. I've attached a copy of the doctor's certificate and I hope to be back in class from 12 May. Until then, my friend is going to record the lectures so I can listen to them at home. I will try to catch up with all the reading too. However, I don't think I can submit the essay next week. Is it possible to have an extension? Thank you for your understanding. Regards, Jameela
Dear Professor Hart,

I'm writing to
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let
you know that I can't attend
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class
for two weeks as I've had an accident and hurt my back. I'm afraid I
also
need to
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ask for
an extension for
next
week's essay.

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I
have medicine for the pain
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I can't
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get
up or walk around much, and the doctor said I should stay in bed and rest as much as possible.
Did you mean "these"?
This
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makes
reading and studying
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very
difficult for me at the moment. I've attached a copy of the doctor's certificate and I hope to be back in
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class
from 12 May.

Until then, my friend is going to record the lectures
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so
I can listen to them at home. I will try to catch up with all the reading too.
However
, I don't
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think
I can submit the essay
next
week. Is it possible to have an extension?

Thank you for your understanding.

Regards,

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Jameela
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IELTS letter Absence from class for two weeks

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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