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Dear Admission Committee Members

Dear Admission Committee Members QKM29
Ms. Nahal Azadi has been as a guest student in Computer Engineering at University of Yazd from 29/12/2019 to 21/07/2021, and I was her master in three specialized lessons including Compiler design fundamentals, Basics of Secure Computing and Integration of organizational applications, she achieved high scores in these three lessons. She has proven to be exceptional in several respects. First, Ms. is exceptionally intelligent and proved to be a very quick study. Furthermore, her questions were always thoughtful and penetrating. She threw herself into her assigned new subjects and science wholeheartedly, and shows every sign of real talent in the classroom and programming tests. Second, it is very good in teamwork with other people. She is exceptionally nice and considerate and sensitive. She is not only good humored and friendly, but also is good at gauging other people's level of knowledge and attitudes. In short, I give her my highest recommendation, and very much hope that the committee judges her application favorably. " Sincerely,
Ms.
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from 29/12
/2019 to 21/07/2021, and I was her master in three specialized lessons including Compiler design fundamentals, Basics of Secure Computing and Integration of organizational applications, she achieved high scores in these three lessons. She has proven to be exceptional in several respects.
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164 words
5.5
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