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currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course, explain why you need a week off, what you want the Principal to do.

currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course, explain why you need a week off, what you want the Principal to do. GDOm
Respected Sir, I am a 2nd year student of Electrical department with registration number 459009. I am studying Electronics and Communication Engineering and have enrolled for the core subjects as Digital Electronics, Analog circuits, Engineering Mathematics and Communication systems. These subjects are more focused on the electronics including analog and digital mixture of communication system. I am writing this leave letter seeking your permission to take one week vacation. My brother's marriage is planned for next month and my presence is required at home since my dad is sick with chronic disease. During the marriage, I have to make the necessary arrangements and take the additional responsibility. After returning from my vacation, I will cover up my all missed lectures during my vacation period by attending recorded videos and completing my assignments. It is my humble request for you to grant me leave for the aforesaid dates. I will be highly grateful for this. Yours sincerely, Mike
Respected Sir,

I am a 2nd year student of Electrical department with registration number 459009. I am studying Electronics and Communication Engineering and have enrolled for the core subjects as Digital Electronics, Analog circuits, Engineering Mathematics and Communication systems. These subjects are more focused on the electronics including analog and digital mixture of communication system.

I am writing this
leave
letter seeking your permission to take
one week
vacation. My brother's marriage
is planned
for
next
month and my presence
is required
at home since my dad is sick with chronic disease. During the marriage, I
have to
make
the necessary arrangements and take the additional responsibility.

After returning from my vacation, I will cover up my all missed lectures during my vacation period by attending recorded videos and completing my assignments. It is my humble request for you to grant me
leave
for the aforesaid dates. I will be
highly
grateful for this.

Yours
sincerely
,

Mike
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IELTS letter currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course, explain why you need a week off, what you want the Principal to do.

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