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currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course, explain why you need a week off, what you want the Principal to do.

currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course, explain why you need a week off, what you want the Principal to do. GDOm

Respected Sir, I am a 2nd year student of Electrical department with registration number 459009. I am studying Electronics and Communication Engineering and have enrolled for the core subjects as Digital Electronics, Analog circuits, Engineering Mathematics and Communication systems. These subjects are more focused on the electronics including analog and digital mixture of communication system. I am writing this leave letter seeking your permission to take one week vacation. My brother's marriage is planned for next month and my presence is required at home since my dad is sick with chronic disease. During the marriage, I have to make the necessary arrangements and take the additional responsibility. After returning from my vacation, I will cover up my all missed lectures during my vacation period by attending recorded videos and completing my assignments. It is my humble request for you to grant me leave for the aforesaid dates. I will be highly grateful for this. Yours sincerely, Mike

Respected Sir,

I am a 2nd year student of Electrical department with registration number 459009. I am studying Electronics and Communication Engineering and have enrolled for the core subjects as Digital Electronics, Analog circuits, Engineering Mathematics and Communication systems. These subjects are more focused on the electronics including analog and digital mixture of communication system.

I am writing this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 letter seeking your permission to take It seems that a hyphen is missing.one-week
one week
 vacation. My brother's marriage is planned
 for next
 month and my presence is required
 at home since my dad is sick with chronic disease. During the marriage, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the necessary arrangements and take the additional responsibility.

After returning from my vacation, I will cover up my all missed lectures during my vacation period by attending recorded videos and completing my assignments. It is my humble request for you to grant me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 for the aforesaid dates. I will be highly
 grateful for this.

Yours sincerely
,

Mike

IELTS letter currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course, explain why you need a week off, what you want the Principal to do.

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

156 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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