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cooking class feedback and to include more courses

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to thank you for the wonderful experience I had during the bakery classes at your institute and am delighted to share my feedback. During the training, I was impressed by the skills of the trainer who not only demonstrated the method but also ensured every person is able to follow the recipe with no obstacles. They ensured to point out the mistakes so that the final product is perfect; both in looks as well as taste. Since the completion of the training, I have baked a couple of cakes for my relatives and friends and they were impressed by the perfect taste, softness and texture. Also, I have been making pies, bread, pizza every week. My family is enjoying the new cuisines as they were bored of having the Indian curry daily. It would be really wonderful if your school can include classes on French and Chinese dishes. It will add more variety to the offering and there is a demand for these. If you decide to do so, please let me know as I am willing to enrol and learn. Thank you for your kind consideration. Yours faithfully, Gaurav

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to thank you for the wonderful experience I had during the bakery classes at your institute and am delighted
 to share my feedback. During the training, I was impressed
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 of the trainer who not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 demonstrated the method This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 ensured every person is able to follow the recipe with no obstacles. They ensured to point out the mistakes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the final product is perfect; both in looks Probable usage error. Use "and" after 'both'.and
as well as
 taste. Since the completion of the training, I have baked a couple of cakes for my relatives and Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).friends, and
friends and
 they were impressed
 by the perfect taste, softness and texture. Also
, I have been making pies, bread, pizza every week. My family is enjoying the new cuisines as they were In standard English it's more accepted to use "bored with" or "bored by".bored withbored by
bored of
 having the Indian curry daily. It would be really
 wonderful if your school can include classes on French and Chinese dishes. It will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 more variety to the offering and there is a demand for these. If you decide to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know as I am willing to enrol and learn. Thank you for your kind consideration. Yours faithfully
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Gaurav