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introduce myself haguysygfewfuew G9YNm
Hello everyone, great to meet you. My full name is Tôn Nữ Quỳnh Như, or you can call me Như. I’m in my early twenties. I’m originally from Quảng Ngãi but I spent most of my life in Tp. Thủ Đức, TpHCM. I like watching movies, specially science – fiction movies, such as Alice in wonderland or Harry Potter series. And my favorite day of the week is Wednesday, because I don’t have any timetable that day so I can lay on my bed and watch all the movies I wanna see. Currently, I’m a freshman at Banking University, my major is International Economics. When I studied at highschool, I thought I was good at Maths, but in university, I have removed that thinking, because all the subjects are so hard and the schedule is very tight, I just eat twice a day because the time not allow me to eat more. It was a pleasure meeting you, I appreciate your ime listening to my introduction
Hello everyone, great to
meet
you. My full name is
Tôn
Nữ
Quỳnh
Như
, or you can call me
Như
. I’m in my early twenties. I’m
originally
from
Quảng
Ngãi
but
I spent most of my life in
Tp
.
Thủ
Đức
,
TpHCM
. I like watching movies,
specially
science
fiction movies, such as
Alice in wonderland
or Harry Potter series. And my favorite day of the week is Wednesday,
because
I don’t have any timetable that day
so
I can lay on my bed and
watch
all the movies I
wanna
see
.
Currently
, I’m a freshman at Banking University, my major is International Economics. When I studied at
highschool
, I
thought
I was
good
at
Maths
,
but
in university, I have removed that thinking,
because
all the subjects are
so
hard
and the schedule is
very
tight, I
just
eat twice a day
because
the time not
allow
me to eat more. It was a pleasure meeting you, I appreciate
your ime
listening to my
introduction
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IELTS letter introduce myself haguysygfewfuew

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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