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Application letter for a course

Application letter for a course 9Lk8w
Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the course in history which commences this September at Winston University. I am 25 years old And I have been completed a Bachelor's degree in History at Cambridge University where I received class honours. I am presently working as History teacher in Estover community college, where I have been for the last four years. Since history is exteremely interesting for me, I decided to learn it deeply. I have participated in many conferences and compititions on history and obtained such as sertificates, awards. While this subject is really enjoyable for me I am now anxious to specialise by gaining futher qualifications before embarking in my chosen career in this field. Please contact me regarding any quiress, I look forward to received your response in the near future. Yours faithfully, Amanda Johnson
Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for the course in
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history
which commences this September at Winston University. I am 25 years
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old
And I have
been completed
a Bachelor's degree in
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History
at Cambridge University where I received
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class
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honours
.

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I
am
presently
working as
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History
teacher in
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Estover
community college, where I have been for the last four years. Since
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history
is
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exteremely
interesting for me, I decided to learn it
deeply
. I have participated in
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many
conferences and
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compititions
on
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history
and obtained such as
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sertificates
, awards. While this subject is
really
enjoyable for me I am
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now
anxious to
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specialise
by gaining
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futher
qualifications
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before
embarking in my chosen career in this field.

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Please
contact me regarding any
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quiress
, I look forward to received your response in the near future.

Yours
faithfully
,

Amanda Johnson
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IELTS letter Application letter for a course

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
138 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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