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There will be a traditional celebration in your country and do you want to invite your friends from an English speaking country .

There will be a traditional celebration in your country and do you want to invite your friends from an English speaking country. 95LBp
Dear Mary I sincerely invite you to come to traditional celebration. I hope this Navruz celebration is interesting for you. In my country, people celebrate this ceremony every year. This party is celebrated with entertainment activities such as a lot of dances, food, games. If you invite Navruz, festival your mood is rise due to the fact our country people don't dreary to you. Moreover, I'm organizing night party club in traditional celebration night time. I hope you don't dull. In my country this celebration is great importance. This is mainly because Navruz holiday is our traditional symbolic day, also day and night is equivalent in 21st March day If you invite our traditional holiday, you will be greeting our national culture. Please do come. I look forward to your arrival. All the best. Joint.
Dear Mary

I
sincerely
invite you to
come
to
traditional
celebration
. I hope this
Navruz
celebration
is interesting for you. In my country,
people
celebrate this ceremony every year. This party
is celebrated
with entertainment activities such as
a lot of
dances, food, games. If you invite
Navruz
, festival your mood is rise due to the fact our country
people
don't dreary to you.
Moreover
, I'm organizing night party club in
traditional
celebration
night time
. I hope you don't dull.

In my country this
celebration
is great importance. This is
mainly
because
Navruz
holiday is our
traditional
symbolic day,
also
day and night is equivalent in 21st March day

If you invite our
traditional
holiday, you will be greeting our national culture.
Please
do
come
. I look forward to your arrival. All the best. Joint.
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IELTS letter There will be a traditional celebration in your country and do you want to invite your friends from an English speaking country.

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