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Complaint letter. Hilton. Date: 28th of July. Clerk Hull. USA. Restaurants food complaint. Dear Mr Hull. I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about your inn’s meal. I was appalled at the poor quality and unsatisfactory food. One day, I felt hungry so I went your restaurant. I was pleased from your waitress. But your inn’s meal was vey tasteless. Particularly, I booked pizza but my pizza was delivered very late, also, when I ate pizza I found a hair from my meal, in addition, pizza was salty. After that, your waitress offers another fast food, but, I did not anything. Consequently, employers did not take my money. And numerous beverages are given to me. I hope you will deal with this matter quickly, your cooks must be careful to prepare a meal. Your faithfully Luiz.
Complaint letter.

Hilton.

Date: 28th of July.

Clerk Hull.

USA.

Restaurants food complaint.

Dear Mr Hull.

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about your inn’s meal. I
was appalled
at the poor quality and unsatisfactory food. One day, I felt hungry
so
I went your restaurant. I was
pleased
from your waitress.
But
your inn’s meal was
vey
tasteless.
Particularly
, I booked pizza
but
my pizza
was delivered
very
late,
also
, when I ate pizza I found a hair from my meal,
in addition
, pizza was salty. After that, your waitress offers another
fast
food,
but
, I did not anything.
Consequently
, employers did not take my money. And numerous beverages are
given
to me. I hope you will deal with this matter
quickly
, your cooks
must
be careful to prepare a meal.

Your
faithfully
Luiz.
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IELTS letter Complaint letter.

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  American English
9 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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