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complain letter to the director of a restaurant

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Dear Sr or Madam. I am writning in a relation with the problem that made me anxiuos at your restaurant. I and my friends went to the restaurant for celebrating my friend's birthday. We ordered the table in advance but when we arrived there were not any free seats for us. So we had to wait 40 minutes. We were very upset that servise which was served us was completely awful. The waiter who treated us badly and he had quarreled with one of my fellows. The food which we ordered was undone. Besides these, we had to wait the food for 20 minutes. I hope you will accept my complain. I think it will be better if you organize better servise system at your restaurant. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yuors faithfully John.

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writning
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anxiuos
 at your restaurant. I and my friends went to the restaurant for celebrating my friend's birthday. We ordered the table in advance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when we arrived there were not any free seats for us. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 we had to wait 40 minutes. We were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 upset that Possible spelling mistake found.serviceservile
servise
 which was served
 us was completely awful. The waiter who treated us Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).badly, and
badly and
 he had quarreled with one of my fellows. The food which we ordered was undone. Besides
 these, we had to wait the food for 20 minutes. I hope you will accept my The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?complaint
complain
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it will be better if you organize better Possible spelling mistake found.serviceservile
servise
 system at your restaurant. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking forward to hearing from you. Possible spelling mistake found.Yours
Yuors
faithfully
 John. 

IELTS letter complain letter to the director of a restaurant

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

137 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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