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complain letter to the director of a restaurant

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Dear Sr or Madam. I am writning in a relation with the problem that made me anxiuos at your restaurant. I and my friends went to the restaurant for celebrating my friend's birthday. We ordered the table in advance but when we arrived there were not any free seats for us. So we had to wait 40 minutes. We were very upset that servise which was served us was completely awful. The waiter who treated us badly and he had quarreled with one of my fellows. The food which we ordered was undone. Besides these, we had to wait the food for 20 minutes. I hope you will accept my complain. I think it will be better if you organize better servise system at your restaurant. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yuors faithfully John.
Dear Sr or Madam. I am
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writning
in a relation with the problem that made me
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anxiuos
at your restaurant. I and my friends went to the restaurant for celebrating my friend's birthday. We ordered the table in advance
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but
when we arrived there were not any free seats for us.
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So
we had to wait 40 minutes. We were
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very
upset that
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servise
which
was served
us was completely awful. The waiter who treated us
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
badly and
he had quarreled with one of my fellows. The food which we ordered was undone.
Besides
these, we had to wait the food for 20 minutes. I hope you will accept my
The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?
complain
. I
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think
it will be better if you organize better
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servise
system at your restaurant.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward to hearing from you.
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Yuors
faithfully
John.
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IELTS letter complain letter to the director of a restaurant

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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