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Complain about workness computer equipment

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Dear Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about your product which I had bought compyuter yesterday your shop. It has not worked. I have angryed during all day last day. I lived near your company office. So I bought it your shop. I am student at Medical university. Thus, I need a kompyuter. Unfortunately, its key board's cable has not. Compyuter is very uncomfortable because it turns on not quickly. As a result, it takes me an hour. Addition to its charge cable too short. To solve such kind problems, I think you will have your product exchange. Otherwise, you will return my money to me. I would be very grateful if you take into consideration my suggestion. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully James Bond.
Dear Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about your product which I had
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bought
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yesterday your shop. It has not worked. I have
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angryed
during all day last day. I
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So
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bought
it your shop. I am student at Medical university.
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, I need a
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kompyuter
. Unfortunately, its key board's cable has not.
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very
uncomfortable
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because
it turns on not
quickly
.
As a result
, it takes me an hour. Addition to its charge cable too short. To solve such kind problems, I
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think
you will have your product exchange.
Otherwise
, you will return my money to me. I would be
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very
grateful if you take into consideration my suggestion. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours
faithfully
James Bond.
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IELTS letter Complain about workness computer equipment

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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