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Hi, First you should correct your sleep time because your mind and body need rest about 8 hours a day specially at night. Then you should change your food schedule and add fruits and vegetable much more than what you eat now because of their vitamins and also you have to decrease your sugar and fat intake. After that you should do exercise seriously. It is not important which kind of sport you like , it is only important to do it. The health is really important because without it life does not have any meaning and every moment you wish to die so consider to my recommends to keep healthy and have happy life. Be healthy, Ali

Hi, First you should correct your sleep time because your mind and body need rest about 8 hours a day specially at night. Then you should change your food schedule and add fruits and vegetable much more than what you eat now because of their vitamins and also you have to decrease your sugar and fat intake. After that you should do exercise seriously. It is not important which kind of sport you like, it is only important to do it. The health is really important because without it life does not have any meaning and every moment you wish to die so consider to my recommends to keep healthy and have happy life. Be healthy, Ali K0WXN
Hi, First you should correct your sleep time because your mind and body need rest about 8 hours a day specially at night. Then you should change your food schedule and add fruits and vegetable much more than what you eat now because of their vitamins and also you have to decrease your sugar and fat intake. After that you should do exercise seriously. It is not important which kind of sport you like, it is only important to do it. The health is really important because without it life does not have any meaning and every moment you wish to die so consider to my recommends to keep healthy and have happy life. Be healthy, Ali
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First
you should correct your sleep time
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because
your mind and body need rest about 8 hours a day
specially
at night.

Then you should
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change
your food schedule and
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add
fruits and vegetable much more than what you eat
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now
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because
of their vitamins and
also
you
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have to
decrease your sugar and
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fat
intake.

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After
that you should do exercise
seriously
. It is not
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important
which kind of sport you like, it is
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only
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important
to do it.

The health is
really
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important
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because
without it life does not have any meaning and every moment you wish to
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die
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so
consider to my recommends to
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keep
healthy and have happy life.

Be healthy,

Ali

IELTS letter Hi, First you should correct your sleep time because your mind and body need rest about 8 hours a day specially at night. Then you should change your food schedule and add fruits and vegetable much more than what you eat now because of their vitamins and also you have to decrease your sugar and fat intake. After that you should do exercise seriously. It is not important which kind of sport you like, it is only important to do it. The health is really important because without it life does not have any meaning and every moment you wish to die so consider to my recommends to keep healthy and have happy life. Be healthy, Ali

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116 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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