Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You have been using the local bus service for about 6 months. The service seems to be getting worse and worse. Write a letter of complaint to the bus company. In your letter • tell them about the buses not running on time • tell them about the level of cleanliness, and the attitude of the drivers • ask them to take some action

You have been using the local bus service for about 6 months. The service seems to be getting worse and worse. Write a letter of complaint to the bus company. In your letter • tell them about the buses not running on time • tell them about the level of cleanliness, and the attitude of the drivers • ask them to take some action bQEwg
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my displeasure on the transportation, provided by your organization, which I have been using for the past half year to commute to my workplace. Let me describe to you the situation in detail. When I started using your bus service, at first, I was quite pleased with the gesture I received. However, for the past one month, the things have gone from bad to worse because the buses are always late from their defined schedule. As a result, I mostly get late to reach my office before the permissible time. Furthermore, the maintenance of the same also declined, as it seems like no cleaning of it has been carried out, from inside and outside, for days. Similarly, the seats are dislocated from their positions and got damaged from various points. Moreover, the behaviour of the drivers is not suitable to drive a bus due to the fact that they start racing with other vehicles on the road and do not halt at the bus-stops. I hope you will look into these matters seriously and perform a root cause analysis on these acts. Consequently, you will take all the possible actions against those who found guilty. On the contrary, the company will make all the efforts to improve their service. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Jay
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my displeasure on the transportation, provided by your organization, which I have been using for the past half year to commute to my workplace.

Let
me
describe
to you the situation in detail. When I
started
using your bus service, at
first
, I was quite
pleased
with the gesture I received.
However
, for the past one month, the things have gone from
bad
to worse
because
the buses are always late from their defined schedule.
As a result
, I
mostly
get
late to reach my office
before
the permissible time.

Furthermore
, the maintenance of the same
also
declined, as it seems like no cleaning of it has
been carried
out, from inside and outside, for days.
Similarly
, the seats
are dislocated
from their positions and
got
damaged from various points.
Moreover
, the
behaviour
of the drivers is not suitable to drive a bus due to the fact that they
start
racing with other vehicles on the road and do not halt at the bus-
stops
.

I hope you will look into these matters
seriously
and perform a root cause analysis on these acts.
Consequently
, you will take all the possible actions against those who found guilty.
On the contrary
, the
company
will
make
all the efforts to
improve
their service.

I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jay
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You have been using the local bus service for about 6 months. The service seems to be getting worse and worse. Write a letter of complaint to the bus company. In your letter • tell them about the buses not running on time • tell them about the level of cleanliness, and the attitude of the drivers • ask them to take some action

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
225 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: