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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complaint about the internet service. I have been a satisfied customer of your company for over a year, on the contrary recently my connection is unstable. Even when it is working, it is extremely slow that it is of no value. Unfortunately, I can not do my office work and assignments. I already informed your customer care department via phone on two separate occasions. Though they responded, yet problems are not solved. In my opinion, there is some technical issue. That's why I would like to you send the best engineer to fix it so that it will not happen again. Furthermore, the bill is due on Friday. Since I have not been receiving any service for two months, I believe that either your reduce the bill amount or refund my money back to me. I hope you will take action promptly. Yours Faithfully, Navdeep Kaur.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complaint about the internet service.

I have been a satisfied customer of your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
for over a year,
on the contrary
recently my connection is unstable. Even when it is working, it is
extremely
slow that it is of no value. Unfortunately, I can not do my office work and assignments.

I already informed your customer care department via phone on two separate occasions. Though they responded,
yet
problems are not solved. In my opinion, there is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
technical issue. That's why I would like to you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
the best engineer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that it will not happen again.

Furthermore
, the bill is due on Friday. Since I have not been receiving any service for two months, I believe that either your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the bill amount or refund my money back to me.

I hope you will take action
promptly
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Navdeep
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Kaur
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IELTS letter Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent Write a letter to your internet service prov. . .

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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