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A local newspaper has conducted a competition recently to find a person who contributed the most to the society. Write a letter to the editor with a recommendation for a suitable person. You should say: – Who is that person? – What is his/her contribution? – How did you meet him/her?

A local newspaper has conducted a competition recently to find a person who contributed the most to the society. Write a letter to the editor with a recommendation for a suitable person. You should say: – Who is that person? – What is his/her contribution? – How did you meet him/her? gxDd7
Dear Sir or Madam, ( Dear Mr Jackson) I am writing this letter to propose Mr Karnaolis be rewarded for his outstanding contribution to make our community a better place. He is a teacher of Mathematics at a government school located near The Central Hospital. Luis always conducts free extra lessons for everybody including pupils from other schools. Every Wednesday he works at a nursing home helping the elderly as a part of his volunteering work. Also, he has opened a chess evening club for neighbours, which works twice a week. People know him as a very polite and friendly person with an open personality. The first time I met Mr Jackson was about a year ago when I took part in preparation for a national holiday celebration. His family and he took almost all the organizational work and spent more than one week on that event. I was lucky to have a brief meeting with him and it was fantastic, he is really a good and helpful person with a kind heart that spends his life to be useful to others and society. Once again thank you for your time and initiative. Yours faithfully, Oleksandr Moskovka
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Dear Mr Jackson)

I am writing this letter to propose Mr
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Karnaolis
be rewarded
for his outstanding contribution to
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make
our community a better place. He is a teacher of Mathematics at a
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government
school located near The Central Hospital.

Luis always conducts free extra lessons for everybody including pupils from other schools. Every Wednesday he works at a nursing home helping the elderly as a part of his volunteering
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work
.
Also
, he has opened a chess evening club for
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neighbours
, which works twice a week.
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People
know him as a
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very
polite and friendly person with an open personality.

The
first
time I met Mr Jackson was about a year ago when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
took part
in preparation for a national holiday celebration. His
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
family and
he took almost all the organizational
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
and spent more than one week on that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. I was lucky to have a brief meeting with him and it was fantastic, he is
really
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and helpful person with a kind heart that spends his life to be useful to others and society.

Once again thank you for your time and initiative.

Yours
faithfully
,

Oleksandr
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Moskovka
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IELTS letter A local newspaper has conducted a competition recently to find a person who contributed the most to the society. Write a letter to the editor with a recommendation for a suitable person. You should say: – Who is that person? – What is his/her contribution? – How did you meet him/her?

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  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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