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Complain about the facilities of changing room at the Gym.

Complain about the facilities of changing room at the Gym. 2RWbk

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the unacceptable state of the male changing room at the Spring Sports Complex. I have been using the gym at your center for several years now, and it would appear that no maintenance work has been carried out on the changing room facilities in all that time. As a result, paints is peeling of the walls, floor ties are cracked, and there is mould and mildew growing around the showers. The neglected and shabby state of the changing room makes me think that you do not care about your customers. I feel that we are being treated like farm animals, and i worry that you are putting our health at risk. It seems that profit is more important than the customer experience. Please address the changing room issue as a matter of urgency. I suggest that a full refurbishment is required, and that you should consider some form of compensation for members. We have tolerated this situation for too long. Your faithfully, John Smith.

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mould
 and mildew growing around the showers.

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. It seems that profit is more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
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Please
 address the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
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 issue as a matter of urgency. I suggest that a full refurbishment is required
, and that you should consider This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 form of compensation for members. We have tolerated this situation for too long. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
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faithfully
, John Smith. 