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You must write application letter to director of specialized school for advertised monday's

You must write application letter to director of specialized school for advertised monday's MrQr9
Dear SirI am writing to apply for the position of English Teacher at the Specialized school. which was advertised in Tuesday's edition of the Day News. I graduated from the University of Urgench in 2016 with a degree in Teaching English. I have been working as a teacher at school 11since 2016, Which is based in teacher Prior to this I worked as a tutor in All or Nothing english teaching cours. I wasted two years as a tutor in this time. I teach grammar section of english exactly. I have an excellent knowledge of English teaching. I am friendly with my students and patient work well I can attract to lesson students and can teach interesting with different attractive activities. Always pupils are delighted with my lesson. I have enclosed a copy of my CV. I would be glad attend an interview at any time convinient to you Your faithfullyAnna Brown
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writing to apply for the position of English Teacher at the Specialized school.
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which
was advertised
in Tuesday's edition of the Day News. I graduated from the University of
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Urgench
in 2016 with a degree in Teaching English. I have been working as a teacher at school 11since 2016, Which
is based
in teacher Prior to this I worked as a tutor in All or Nothing
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english
teaching
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cours
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I
wasted two years as a tutor in this time.
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I
teach grammar section of
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english
exactly.
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I
have an excellent knowledge of English teaching.
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I
am friendly with my students and patient work well I can attract to lesson students and can teach interesting with
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different
attractive activities.
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Always
pupils
are delighted
with my lesson. I have enclosed a copy of my CV. I would be glad attend an interview at any time
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convinient
to you Your
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faithfullyAnna
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Brown
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IELTS letter You must write application letter to director of specialized school for advertised monday's

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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