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Claim lost watch from insurance company. provide details of watch and what you want them to do with

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I recently lost my wristwatch while on a holiday in Holland. The wristwatch is a black strapped Rolax branded with a round dial. It has a date window which is customized with a luminous background. All the markers are luminescent too. My grandfather gifted it to me at my last birthday party, therefore; the watch is so sentimental to me. I lost it when I was having coffee with my friend in the cafeteria behind the hotel. I believe the coffee shop was called Brew It and it was surrounded by a reservoir which could be seen from the hotel room we stayed in. We had been at the coffee stop for around 30 minutes when I noticed the watch was missing. I am entitled to get the full coverage for the above-mentioned item and request that you instruct me with the procedure that has to be done to proceed. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Nimal
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I recently lost my wristwatch while on a holiday in Holland.

The wristwatch is a black strapped
Rolax
branded with a round dial. It has a date window which
is customized
with a luminous background. All the markers are luminescent too. My grandfather gifted it to me at my last birthday party,
therefore
; the
watch
is
so
sentimental to me.

I lost it when I was having coffee with my friend in the cafeteria behind the hotel. I believe the coffee shop
was called
Brew It and it
was surrounded
by a reservoir which could be
seen
from the hotel room we stayed in. We had been at the coffee
stop
for around 30 minutes when I noticed the
watch
was missing.

I
am entitled
to
get
the full coverage for the above-mentioned item and request that you instruct me with the procedure that
has to
be done
to proceed.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nimal
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IELTS letter Claim lost watch from insurance company. provide details of watch and what you want them to do with

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174 words
6.0
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