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Dear Sarah, I hope you’re well. I’m extremely thankful to you for lending me your favorite tennis racket for my matches yesterday. I’m sorry to inform you that your racket got serious damage while playing. I know how much you value this racket. I’ve been feel supremely sorry for this event and I can’t find words to show how miserable I feel about it. Let me explain to you what actually happen on that fateful day, I planned to go playing tennis. While playing, I was feeling consequently comfortable with your racket, and was enjoying every one of my shots. At one point, I missed a shot and the racket hit the ground and due to that breakdown. I would like to take it to the sports equipment store to have fixed what’s more, I deeply apologize for this although it happens unwillingly. I hope you will understand the situation and forgive me for this mistake. You’re lovingly, Paris
Dear Sarah,

I hope you’re well. I’m
extremely
thankful to you for lending me your favorite tennis racket for my matches yesterday.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m sorry to inform you that your racket
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
serious damage while playing.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
know how much you value this racket.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’ve been feel
supremely
sorry for this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
and I can’t find words to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
how miserable I feel about it.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
to you what actually happen on that fateful day, I planned to go playing tennis. While playing, I was feeling
consequently
comfortable with your racket, and was enjoying every one of my shots. At one point, I missed a shot and the racket hit the ground and due to that breakdown.

I would like to take it to the sports equipment store to have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
what’s more, I
deeply
apologize for this although it happens
unwillingly
.

I hope you will understand the situation and forgive me for this mistake.

You’re
lovingly
,

Paris
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IELTS letter borrow something and damage it

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  American English
8 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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