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Dear Miss Rostova. I am writing to inquire about taking Russian lessons with you. I read the article about you and saw your advert in this week's local paper and I believe that you are just the person I am looking for. I am particularly keen to learn from a native speaker like you, so I do hope that you have space in your timetable to fit me in for some lessons. I want to learn your language because I will be travelling to Russia for six months next year to learn about Russian customs and traditions. I would be grateful if you let me know what availability you have. Twice a week would be ideal if that is possible. I work in the evenings that is why daytime would be fine. Please, could you also tell me your charge for tuition and how long each lesson would last? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards, Khadicha Turgunova

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Rostova
. I am writing to inquire about taking Russian lessons with you. I read the article about you and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 your advert in this week's local paper and I believe that you are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 the person I am looking for. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am particularly
 keen to learn from a native speaker like you, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I do hope that you have space in your timetable to fit me in for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 lessons. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want to learn your language This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I will be travelling to Russia for six months next
 year to learn about Russian customs and traditions. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would be grateful if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know what availability you have. Twice a week would be ideal if that is
 possible. I work in the evenings that is
 why daytime would be fine. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
, could you also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me your charge for tuition and how long each lesson would last? I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Kind regards, Possible spelling mistake found.Khadijah
Khadicha
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Turgunova