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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on the television. use specific reasons and examples to support opinion.

Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on the television. use specific reasons and examples to support opinion. OW7y
Dear Lecturer I would like to reintroduce myself as Peter and my student number is #123. I am taking your "Project Management in 100 days" part-time course. I regretfully write this letter to inform you about dropping off from your course. As a full-time staff of a million-dollar company, I expected this course would be a valuable addition to my resume for further growth opportunities. Unfortunately, the busy office schedule and intensive course have left me with no choice other than to make a choice either my full-time job or the course. The first few weeks were fine but the course has grown mature at this point. The volume of assignments. quizzes and tests have increased. These days I hardly get time for myself let alone exercise or social gatherings which are integral to my well-being. In a nutshell, I have to make this tough decision of giving up on my dream of getting certified as a graduate of this course. I would like to enquire about the possibility of completing the remaining modules of the course and get certified? Looking forward to hearing from you regarding possible steps ahead. Yours Sincerely, Peter B
Dear Lecturer

I would like to reintroduce myself as Peter and my student number is #123. I am taking your
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Project Management in 100 days
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part-time
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course
. I
regretfully
write this letter to inform you about dropping off from your course.

As a full-time staff of a million-dollar
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company
, I
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expected
this
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course
would be a valuable addition to my resume for
further
growth opportunities. Unfortunately, the busy office schedule and intensive
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course
have
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left
me with no choice other than to
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make
a choice either my full-time job or the course.

The
first
few weeks were fine
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but
the
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course
has grown mature at this point. The volume of assignments.
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quizzes
and
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tests
have increased. These days I hardly
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get
time for myself
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let
alone exercise or social gatherings which are integral to my well-being. In a nutshell, I
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have to
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make
this tough decision of giving up on my dream of getting certified as a graduate of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I would like to
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enquire
about the possibility of completing the remaining modules of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
certified? Looking forward to
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hearing


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from
you regarding possible steps ahead.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Peter B
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IELTS letter Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on the television. use specific reasons and examples to support opinion.

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