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You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April adition of the magazine Teaching professional.

You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April adition of the magazine Teaching professional. Nmgad
Dear Msr. John Sullivan. I am very interested in your advertisement in the April adition of the magazine Teaching Professional and I should like to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor. I am thirty-four years old and I have Bachelor's degrees in Spanish and Linguistics so have worked extensively with young adults, teaching Spanish both in Ferghana, Uzbekistan. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I am active and able to do multiple tasks at same time. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to my skills and experiences. In addition to this, I can speak two languages: Russian and English besides that I partipicate in Computer course. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting trees, flowers and swimming, running. I am sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. Should you be interested in my qualifications and experience as a teacher, please do not hesitate to contact me at 91 32111666 I look forward to hearing from you. SincerelyAnna Julience.
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. John Sullivan. I am
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interested in your advertisement in the April
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of the magazine Teaching Professional and I should like to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor. I am thirty-four years
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Bachelor
's degrees in Spanish and Linguistics
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have worked
extensively
with young adults, teaching Spanish both in
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Ferghana
, Uzbekistan.
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I
feel I have
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of the
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qualifications needed for this job.
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I
am active and able to do multiple tasks at same time.
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am
currently
looking for a position that will
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allow
me to my
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skills
and experiences.
In addition
to this, I can speak two languages: Russian and English
besides
that I
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partipicate
in Computer course. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting trees, flowers and swimming, running. I am sociable and I can
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get
on well with new
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people
easily
. Should you
be interested
in my qualifications and experience as a teacher,
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please
do not hesitate to contact me at 91 32111666 I look forward to hearing from you.
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SincerelyAnna
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Julience
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IELTS letter You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April adition of the magazine Teaching professional.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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