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Applying for Fatimiyah Education Network Scholarship Program

Applying for Fatimiyah Education Network Scholarship Program 6xrWG
Sir/Madam, Most respectfully, I Syed Shahroz Hassan Jafri s/o Syed Naseer ul Hasan Jafri is applying for the scholarship. Here is a little information about myself. I am a hardworking individual who pays very serious attention to my studies. Last year I cleared my Intermediate in Commerce and now I am perusing for ACCA from TSA (Tabani Institute of Accountancy). I live in malir (House no. 31 Extension moinabad model colony). My father is a government servant of Sindh Police and his monthly salary is 48, 000/- I have 2 Sister. Recently I got admission in ACCA and done my MA1. my father has hardly submitted tuition fee 75, 000/- and 13000/- of my MA-1 paper fee by taking of loans. His monthly salary is not likely not be enough to cover the whole back to back tuition and accommodation paper fees. He has so many other responsibilities included my sister wedding. It is my wish to build my own future and make my parent dream true. I will be very thankful to have scholarship and a support system to carry on with my studies by respected Fatimiyah Education Network. I am attaching my Pay slip, Fee structure and all my documents. Thank you for your consideration. If you require any further information regarding my application, you may contact me anytime at 03161060931. I have so many expectations to hear positive response from your side. I will contact you to follow up in the coming week. Thank you. Your sincerely, Syed Shahroz Hassan Jafri
Sir/Madam,

Most
respectfully
, I
Syed
Shahroz
Hassan
Jafri
s/o
Syed
Naseer
ul
Hasan
Jafri
is applying for the scholarship. Here is a
little
information about myself. I am a hardworking individual who pays
very
serious attention to my studies. Last year I cleared my Intermediate in Commerce and
now
I am perusing for
ACCA
from TSA (
Tabani
Institute of Accountancy). I
live
in
malir
(
House
no. 31 Extension
moinabad
model colony). My father is a
government
servant of
Sindh
Police and his monthly salary is 48, 000/- I have 2 Sister. Recently I
got
admission in
ACCA
and done my MA1.
my
father has hardly submitted tuition
fee
75, 000/- and 13000/- of my MA-1 paper
fee
by taking of loans. His monthly salary is not likely not be
enough
to cover the whole back to back tuition and accommodation paper
fees
. He has
so
many
other responsibilities included my sister wedding. It is my wish to build my
own
future and
make
my parent dream true. I will be
very
thankful to have scholarship and a support system to carry on with my studies by respected
Fatimiyah
Education Network.

I am attaching my Pay slip,
Fee
structure and all my documents.

Thank you for your consideration. If you require any
further
information regarding my application, you may contact me anytime at 03161060931. I have
so
many
expectations to hear
positive
response from your side. I will contact you to follow up in the coming week.

Thank you.

Your
sincerely
,

Syed
Shahroz
Hassan
Jafri
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IELTS letter Applying for Fatimiyah Education Network Scholarship Program

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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