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Write apology letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work

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Dear Mr drummond I am writing to apologize for the meeting I missed on October 28th about development plans for the company. I am sincerely sorry for not being able to attend this meeting. I am aware of the importance of the meeting but, unfortunately, my absence was unavoidable. The reason for not attending this meeting was that I had a car accident on the way to work that day although the accident was not serious I was taken to hospital for eye checkup and not allowed to leave until I had been given the all clear from a doctor. I understand how crucial this meeting was and, therefore, I have asked one of my colleague, Sandra brown, to review the meeting with me after work today. We will go over all the development plans and also peoples roles and responsibilities. By the end of today, I will be up to send with all plans. I hope you will forgive my absence and be assured for my commitment to this company and its future. Yours sincerely Richard Brollend
Dear Mr
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drummond
I am writing to apologize for the
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meeting
I missed on October 28th about development plans for the
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company
.

I am
sincerely
sorry for not being able to attend this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
. I am aware of the importance of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
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but
, unfortunately, my absence was unavoidable.

The reason for not attending this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
was that I had a car accident on the way to work that day although the accident was not serious I
was taken
to hospital for eye checkup and not
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allowed
to
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leave
until I had been
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given
the all
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clear
from a doctor.

I understand how crucial this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
was and,
therefore
, I have asked one of my colleague, Sandra brown, to review the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
with me after work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
. We will go over all the development plans and
also
peoples roles and responsibilities. By the
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end
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, I will be up to
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send
with all plans.

I hope you will forgive my absence and
be assured
for my commitment to this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and its future.

Yours
sincerely
Richard
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Brollend

IELTS letter Write apology letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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