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Write a letter to an online shop asking for an exchange for something you bought from them. In your letter include: - What you bought - What the problem is - Why you want an exchange

Write a letter to an online shop asking for an exchange for something you bought from them. In your letter include: - What you bought - What the problem is - Why you want an exchange MMJeo
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to ask to exchange my recent online order. Allow my to elaborate on exactly what the problem I faced with. I purchased a cup from your web store but the cup I received is not red. I wanted to get red one as I precised in my order, however, I got the black cup. Check and screenshot of order details are attached. Actually, I am a cancer by horoscope and I cannot have black things, otherwise, I may never get married. I cannot even throw in the trash it because cancers should not deal with black stuff. That problem really matters for me. Hopefully, you can empathize with my situation. That is why I want to get red cup instead black cup. I know that I can return cup to you on my own, but I cannot interact with something black. Thus, I am requesting you to send carrier to deliver to me the red cup and also take away the black one. If you do not refuse me in my asking, you will be paid generously by the Karma. Gratefully yours, Egg Or Shoutonhint
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to ask to exchange my recent online order.

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Allow
my to elaborate on exactly what the problem I faced with.

I
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purchased
a
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cup
from your web store
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but
the
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cup
I received is not red.

I wanted to
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get
red one as I
'precised' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "précised"
precised
in my order,
however
, I
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got
the black
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cup
.
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Check
and screenshot of order
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details
are attached
.

Actually, I am a cancer by horoscope and I cannot have black things,
otherwise
, I may never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
married.

I cannot even throw in the trash it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
cancers should not deal with black stuff.

That problem
really
matters for me.
Hopefully
, you can empathize with my situation.

That is
why I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
red
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cup
instead
black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cup
. I know that I can return
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cup
to you on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I cannot interact with something black.

Thus
, I am requesting you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
carrier to deliver to me the red
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cup
and
also
take away the black one.

If you do not refuse me in my asking, you will
be paid
generously
by the Karma.

Gratefully
yours,

Egg Or
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Shoutonhint
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IELTS letter Write a letter to an online shop asking for an exchange for something you bought from them. In your letter include: - What you bought - What the problem is - Why you want an exchange

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  American English
13 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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