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Letter for Deducted Leaves Waives to management

Letter for Deducted Leaves Waives to management awGb7
Sir/Madam, Most respectfully, I Rida Jafri, working in HR department as Senior HR Officer. In last August 2020, I and my family were infected and tested positive. That time it was my responsibility to isolate myself immediately for that reason I was not able to join office until complete isolation and tested negative. Meanwhile, I was in the coordination with my team to look after my tasks. My 17 days leaves were deducted from my Annual leaves 2020 – 21. It is my humble request to the management to please waive my covid19 deducted leaves. Perhaps, I am planning to go to Karbala for the Ziarat excepted in June. I am appealing you to please look this case to avoid further deduction. I will be very thankful to have approbation on my application and will be waiting to have the positive response. Your Sincerely, Rida Jafri
Sir/Madam,

Most
respectfully
, I
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Rida
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Jafri
, working in HR department as Senior HR Officer. In last August 2020, I and my family
were infected
and
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tested
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positive
. That time it was my responsibility to isolate myself immediately for that reason I was not able to
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join
office until complete isolation and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tested
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negative
. Meanwhile, I was in the coordination with my team to look after my tasks. My 17 days
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leaves
were deducted
from my Annual
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leaves
2020 – 21. It is my humble request to the management to
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please
waive my
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid19
deducted
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leaves
. Perhaps, I am planning to go to
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Karbala
for the
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Ziarat
excepted in June. I am appealing you to
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please
look this case to avoid
further
deduction.

I will be
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very
thankful to have approbation on my application and will be waiting to have the
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positive
response.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
Sincerely
,

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Rida
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Jafri
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IELTS letter Letter for Deducted Leaves Waives to management

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
145 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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