Dear Sir or Madam,
I am along-standing reader of your weekly edition of “Travel with Us” Magazine. I am writing this letter mainly to draw your immediate attention regarding an article published about my hometown in an effort to provide a bit more exposure to travel-related activities in it. Well, while I appreciate this helpful information; however, i reget to inform you that there is a factual error that i am concerned about.
To begin with. I read the complete article throughly. Since you wrote regarding culture and customs i found that it quite interesting. Nonetheless, the material related to the climate of our city was incorrectl. You reckon that maximum temperature reaches up to 40 Cdegrees which is not true, reality our urban does not get higher than 32 degrees C during the hot season. Correctly this information on your magazine is very vital for the livelihood of numerous peoples in my town in that they heavily rely on this tourist industry.
In addition, wrong instruction could lead prospective tourists to visit my country at the wrong time which will cause them disappointment and moreover it exert significant affect on our country’s reputable.
In light of the situation, i would appreciate as long as you could investigate the facts that i have pointed out and hope you will take the necessary steps to provide factual information to readers.
Yours faithfully,
Thu Loan Nguyen
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am along-standing reader of your weekly edition of “Travel with Us” Magazine. I am writing this letter
mainly
to draw your immediate attention regarding an article published about my hometown in an effort to provide a bit more exposure to travel-related activities in it. Well, while I appreciate this helpful information;
however
, i
reget
to inform you that there is a factual error that
i
am concerned
about.
To
begin
with. I read the complete article
throughly
. Since you wrote regarding culture and customs
i
found that
it quite interesting
. Nonetheless, the material related to the climate of our city was
incorrectl
. You reckon that maximum temperature reaches up to 40
Cdegrees
which is not true, reality our urban does not
get
higher than 32 degrees C during the hot season.
Correctly
this information on your magazine is
very
vital for the livelihood of numerous peoples in my town in that they
heavily
rely on this tourist industry.
In addition
,
wrong
instruction could lead prospective tourists to visit my country at the
wrong
time which will cause them disappointment and
moreover
it
exert
significant
affect
on our country’s reputable.
In light of the situation,
i
would appreciate as long as you could investigate the facts that
i
have pointed out and hope you will take the necessary steps to provide factual information to readers.
Yours
faithfully
,
Thu Loan Nguyen
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