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A business email: Apologies for damaged goods

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Dear customer, We feel really sorry to hear your problems with the appliance, Firts we want to apologise for the incovenients we caused you. Thanks for letting us know your issues with the appliance, we would love to give you a new one for free, and a cupon to buy in our shop with discount. We assure you this problem isn't going to happen again and that you can continue buying in our department without any troubles. All the best, manager.
Dear customer,

We feel
really
sorry to hear your problems with the appliance,
Firts
we want to
apologise
for the
incovenients
we caused you.

Thanks for letting us know your issues with the appliance, we would
love
to give you a new one for free, and a
cupon
to
buy
in our shop with discount.

We assure you this problem isn't going to happen again and that you can continue buying in our department without any troubles.

All the best, manager.
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IELTS letter A business email: Apologies for damaged goods

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
81 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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