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A business email: Missed deadlines

A business email: Missed deadlines MMJJk
Dear employees, It's unfornate to been informed that some of you haven't completed the urgent task that I asked you to do before the deadline, and it's not the first time this happens. Dont't follow the dealine time can have severe problems to our agency and can make us lose our costumers. To the employees that can't make it to the deadline I suggest to come talk to me in person to search a solution before the problem get bigger. Waiting for a response, manager.
Dear employees,

It's
unfornate
to
been informed
that
some
of you haven't completed the urgent task that I asked you to do
before
the deadline, and it's not the
first
time this happens.

Dont't
follow the
dealine
time can have severe problems to our agency and can
make
us lose our costumers.

To the employees that can't
make
it to the deadline I suggest to
come
talk to me in person to search a solution
before
the problem
get
bigger.

Waiting for a response, manager.
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IELTS letter A business email: Missed deadlines

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
85 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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