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Letter to inform about an upcoming wedding

Letter to inform about an upcoming wedding GLbYw

Hi Emily, This is Jill, we met at the art exhibition last year. I hope this email finds you well. Jack and I engaged! I would love it so very much if you could make it to our wedding. You played a huge role in us getting together and it only makes sense that you are part of the big day. By the way, I lost all my contacts as my phone was stolen. This is my new number 123 456 789. I look forward to hearing back from you. Regards, Your friend, Jill

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Regards,

Your friend, Jill

IELTS letter Letter to inform about an upcoming wedding

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

93 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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