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MY FAVOURITE PERSON IN MY LIFE.

MY FAVOURITE PERSON IN MY LIFE. 6N0dx
HELLO EVERYONE, MY TOPIC IS MY FAVOURITE PERSON. MY FAVOURITE PERSON IS MY TECAHER AND MY TEACHER NAME IS ANKUR. HE IS SELF DRIVEN MAN AND VERY CALM IN EVERY SITUATION. HE ALWAYS MOTIVATE THE STUDENT BECAUSE HE KNOW ABOUT THE POTENTIAL OF ALL THE STUDENT. HE IS VERY STRICT TEACHER. HE KNOWS ALL THE SUBJECT BUT HE TEACHES ONLY GUJARATI. MY SIR ALWAYS GIVE GOOD THOUGHTS AND GIVE BEST PATH FOR RIGHT DIRECTION. HE DOES NOT SCOLDES EVERY TIME. THIS ARE ALL QUALITIES ATTRACT ME THAT'S WHY HE IS MY FAVOURITE PERSON IN MY LIFE.
HELLO EVERYONE, MY TOPIC IS MY
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FAVOURITE
PERSON. MY
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FAVOURITE
PERSON IS MY
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TECAHER
AND MY TEACHER NAME IS
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ANKUR
. HE IS SELF DRIVEN
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
MAN
AND
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
VERY
CALM IN EVERY SITUATION. HE ALWAYS
The pronoun 'HE' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "motivates", "motivated".
MOTIVATE
THE STUDENT
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
BECAUSE
HE
The pronoun 'HE' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "knows", "knew".
KNOW
ABOUT THE POTENTIAL OF ALL THE STUDENT.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
HE
IS
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
VERY
STRICT TEACHER.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
HE
KNOWS ALL THE SUBJECT
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
BUT
HE TEACHES
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ONLY
GUJARATI. MY SIR ALWAYS GIVE
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
GOOD
THOUGHTS AND
A determiner is probably missing here: "GIVE the BEST".
GIVE BEST
PATH FOR RIGHT DIRECTION. HE DOES NOT
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SCOLDES
EVERY TIME.
The verb 'ARE' is plural. Did you mean "these ARE", "THIS is" or "THIS was"?
THIS ARE
ALL QUALITIES ATTRACT ME THAT'S WHY HE IS MY
Possible spelling mistake. 'FAVOURITE' is British English.
FAVOURITE
PERSON IN MY LIFE.
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IELTS letter MY FAVOURITE PERSON IN MY LIFE.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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