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Apology letter to a friend for missing his her birthday party

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Dear MalikaI'm writing to you to apologize you for missing your birthday party. I hope you will accept my apology letter. I'm searching a new job at the moment that's why I applied for some jobs. The day when you celebrated your birthday party, the director of a school called me, so I had to go to job interview. Unfortunately, I couldn't get the job. Nowadays I'm trying to get another work. For getting you upset, let's meet at the park on this Sunday and we'll have great time together going to the cinema, having lunch, entertaining amusements. I hope you forgive and understand me. Your best friend Muyassar
Dear
MalikaI
'm writing to you to apologize you for missing your birthday party. I hope you will accept my apology letter. I'm searching a new
job
at the moment that's why I applied for
some
jobs
. The day when you celebrated your birthday party, the director of a school called me,
so
I had to go to
job
interview. Unfortunately, I couldn't
get
the
job
. Nowadays I'm trying to
get
another work. For getting you upset,
let
's
meet
at the park on this
Sunday and
we'll have great time together going to the cinema, having lunch, entertaining amusements. I hope you forgive and understand me. Your best friend
Muyassar
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IELTS letter Apology letter to a friend for missing his her birthday party

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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