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Apology Letter For Damaging Camera

Apology Letter For Damaging Camera 0MAj5

Dear Jake, Sorry it's taken me a long to write to you but at last I got the courage to write you a letter to explain why I haven't returned the camera which I borrowed from you. To be honest, I've been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up that I damaged your camera accidently. I am so very sorry. I know you bought that camera recently and you have been saving money for it for a long time. What happened is that I was clicking pictures near the beach and I accidently fell in the water. The Camera got wet and after which pictures were coming blurry. I tried some DIY techniques to repair it but the pictures were still the same. I have sent it to the service center for repair as I had the copy of the receipt within your camera bag. They said the camera can be as good as before and I should receive it by the end of this week. After that I will return it back to you. Again I am very sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you forgive me. Best wishes, Jane

Dear Jake,

Sorry it's taken me a long to write to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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got
 the courage to write you a letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 why

I haven't returned the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 which I borrowed from you.

To be honest, I've been feeling This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 guilty that I delayed writing to you.

I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 up that I damaged your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
Possible spelling mistake found.accidentaccidentallyaccidentsaccidentalancientlyaccidentals
accidently
. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 sorry.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 know you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 recently and you have been saving money for it for a long time.

What happened is that I was clicking pictures near the beach and I Possible spelling mistake found.accidentaccidentallyaccidentsaccidentalancientlyaccidentals
accidently
 fell in the water.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
Camera
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got
 wet and after which pictures were coming blurry. I tried This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 DIY techniques to repair it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the pictures were still
 the same.

I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 it to the service center for repair as I had the copy of the receipt within your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 bag.

They said the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 can be as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and I should receive it by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this week.

“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that I will return it back to you.

Again I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you forgive me.

Best wishes,

Jane