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Apology for lost school

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My friend is DavronbekI apologyize to you. I blamed you for rushing you into your house becouse your frind was uspet with me. I apologize for this mistake, it willnot happen a gain. If you give me the number of Ashurbekov Davronbek. I apologize. Iapologize for the inconvenieno. Becouse when you go to heaven, if you don`t get enough. Iask you friend a reuard so a friend is a priceless trea sure. Even if your friends unforgivenes upsets me I wan`t be offendend by you. Becouse this case happened to me, so I will not be uspet, I wrote this letter of apology to Ashurbekov Davronbek. If you don`t forgive me let`s talk face to face this situation will never happen again and I your new book lost. I`am you is with out new book, tate give. This is reason: Books from library lost. I our is books name ''Guliver is Travelling''. You I`am books is author wrtie down. Please I`m sorry. Your best friends Mirzatillayev Zikrullo04. 12. 2021. Apology for last books.
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this case happened to me,
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. If you
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forgive me
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lost. I`am you
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name ''
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is Travelling''. You I`am
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Mirzatillayev
Zikrullo04. 12. 2021. Apology for last
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IELTS letter Apology for lost school

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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