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Apology for lost books in the school

Apology for lost books in the school Arl9e
Dear my best friend Allayer. I am writing to apologies for I lost the book. I got from you please accept my sincerest apologies for the problem is that. I lost the book I got from you that I promised to give back. One day I went to a bar and there was a beating some one took your book and run away. I could not catch it please for give me. I have a lot of books one of them Headway. I went to give you this book it is a very meaningful and beautiful book. I hope you like the book. Ollayor please forgive me. I hope we can reconcile and continue our friendship. I apologize again for what I did. You should definitely read this book. I hope you will accept my apologies. I know you sorry me! Yours best and good friend Shahrud Mirzo Khazanov.
Dear my best friend
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Allayer
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I am writing
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to apologies
for I lost the
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book
. I
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got
from you
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please
accept my sincerest apologies for the problem is that.
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I
lost the
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book
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
from you that I promised to give back. One day I went to a bar and there was a beating
Did you mean "someone"?
some one
took your
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book
and run away. I could not catch it
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please
for give me. I have
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a lot of
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books
one of them Headway.
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I
went to give you this
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book
it is a
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very
meaningful and
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beautiful
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book
.
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I
hope you like the
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book
.
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Ollayor
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please
forgive me. I hope we can reconcile and continue our friendship. I apologize again for what I did. You should definitely read this
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book
. I hope you will accept my apologies. I know you sorry me!

Yours best and
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good
friend

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Shahrud
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Mirzo
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Khazanov
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IELTS letter Apology for lost books in the school

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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