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Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner

Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner lDRo

Dear Grandmother How are you doing? I’m so sorry I haven’t been able to visit you for the past month as I’ve been terribly busy with my studies. I’m due to sit for my exams next week and there is so much for me to prepare. On top of my theory tests, there are practical tests that I will have to take to prove my competency as a dentist before I’m allowed to practice on patients. My classes will end in three weeks’ time after my finals and I’ll be able to spend some time with you for a couple of days after that. I hope that you haven’t made any arrangements to go out of town during that time. If you are free then I’ll be able to visit you when my internship starts in the first week of March as I wouldn’t be swarmed with work. I am dying to see you. Your lovingly Aarthi

Dear Grandmother

How are you doing? I’m This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 sorry I haven’t been able to visit you for the past month as I’ve been terribly
 busy with my studies.

I’m due to sit for my exams next
 week and there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much for me to prepare. On top of my theory This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluates
tests
, there are practical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluates
tests
 that I will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take to prove my competency as a dentist This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I’m This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to practice on patients.

My classes will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 in three weeks’ time after my finals and I’ll be able to spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time with you for a couple of days after that. I hope that you haven’t made any arrangements to go out of town during that time. If you are free then I’ll be able to visit you when my internship This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 in the first
 week of March as I wouldn’t be swarmed
 with work. I am dying to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you.

Your lovingly


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IELTS letter Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

156 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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