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Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner

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Dear Grandmother How are you doing? I’m so sorry I haven’t been able to visit you for the past month as I’ve been terribly busy with my studies. I’m due to sit for my exams next week and there is so much for me to prepare. On top of my theory tests, there are practical tests that I will have to take to prove my competency as a dentist before I’m allowed to practice on patients. My classes will end in three weeks’ time after my finals and I’ll be able to spend some time with you for a couple of days after that. I hope that you haven’t made any arrangements to go out of town during that time. If you are free then I’ll be able to visit you when my internship starts in the first week of March as I wouldn’t be swarmed with work. I am dying to see you. Your lovingly Aarthi
Dear Grandmother

How are you doing? I’m
so
sorry I haven’t been able to visit you for the past month as I’ve been
terribly
busy with my studies.

I’m due to sit for my exams
next
week and there is
so
much for me to prepare. On top of my theory
tests
, there are practical
tests
that I will
have to
take to prove my competency as a dentist
before
I’m
allowed
to practice on patients.

My classes will
end
in three weeks’ time after my finals and I’ll be able to spend
some
time with you for a couple of days after that. I hope that you haven’t made any arrangements to go out of town during that time. If you are free then I’ll be able to visit you when my internship
starts
in the
first
week of March as I wouldn’t
be swarmed
with work. I am dying to
see
you.

Your
lovingly


Aarthi
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IELTS letter Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
156 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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