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It's really kind of you to let me stay at your flat while you are on holiday. Please could you let me know how to get the keys? And could you tell me anything else I need to know about the house and whether anywhere near that I can buy food?

It's really kind of you to let me stay at your flat while you are on holiday. Please could you let me know how to get the keys? And could you tell me anything else I need to know about the house and whether anywhere near that I can buy food? D6Py6
Hi Kim, Hope you are well. I’m glad that I can help you while being away. Besides, I need someone to take after the house. It would be disappointing to see my house dusty after having a great time here. If you ask for the key, then it is now given to my neighbour. She is a shopkeeper store sells bread in all shapes. But I must aware you that she doesn’t like wasting time helping someone since she has lots of customers. To be honest, she wasn’t really willing to hold the key for me. So you should ask briefly and leave with the key as soon as you can. About the house, it’s quite small but cozy. There is two bedrooms, a bathroom and a small kitchen. The television is rather old now, so you can’t turn it on unless you have a remote control. I rarely use the bathtub as it is water-wasting, so you might need to clean the bathtub a bit. Also, you might be panic with the flickering light bulb in the hall. But believe me, just turn it off and everything will be alright. And If you are hungry, there are some of my favourite places to eat that I strongly recommend you. The first is the restaurant next to the police office. The second is the porridge shop which is behind my house. But you’d better not try the bread of the short-tempered woman’s store. It’s always cool, not like the maker’s face.
Hi Kim,

Hope you are well. I’m glad that I can
help
you while being away.
Besides
, I need someone to take after the
house
. It would be disappointing to
see
my
house
dusty after having a great time here.

If you
ask for
the key, then it is
now
given
to my
neighbour
. She is a shopkeeper store sells bread in all shapes.
But
I
must aware
you that she doesn’t like wasting time helping someone since she has lots of customers. To be honest, she wasn’t
really
willing to hold the key for me.
So
you should ask
briefly
and
leave
with the key as
soon
as you can.

About the
house
, it’s quite
small
but
cozy.
There is two bedrooms
, a bathroom and a
small
kitchen. The television is
rather
old
now
,
so
you can’t turn it on unless you have a remote control. I rarely
use
the bathtub as it is water-wasting,
so
you might need to clean the bathtub a bit.
Also
, you might be panic with the flickering light bulb in the hall.
But
believe me,
just
turn it off and everything will be alright.

And If you are hungry, there are
some
of my
favourite
places to eat that I
strongly
recommend you. The
first
is the restaurant
next
to the police office. The second is the porridge shop which is behind my
house
.
But
you’d better not try the bread of the short-tempered woman’s store. It’s always cool, not like the maker’s face.
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IELTS letter It's really kind of you to let me stay at your flat while you are on holiday. Please could you let me know how to get the keys? And could you tell me anything else I need to know about the house and whether anywhere near that I can buy food?

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