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APLOGY FOR LAST BOOK IN THE SCHOOL

APLOGY FOR LAST BOOK IN THE SCHOOL J3Gj6
Dear AhmadjonI'm writing to ask if you could help me with I would appreciate it if you could give me some adwice about 15there abig problem with a book at my school. I can help me with them? How can Ihelp stand up for some one who's being book I friend new book to make them? what is more friend I he friend help them? That why is being them? Thank you for talking the time to read this letter. I under stand that you a busy person and are advice you offer would be greatly appreciated. If its help ful. I don't be more than happy to dicuss my questions over the phone or coffee. My contact details can be found at the end of this letter. Thank you very much Yours fouth fully Name: MirsaidSurname: Ibrohimov
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AhmadjonI
'm writing to ask if you could
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help
me with

I would appreciate it if you could give me
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some
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adwice
about 15there
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abig
problem with a book at my school. I can
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help
me with them? How can
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Ihelp
stand up for
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some one
who's being
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book
I friend new book to
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make
them?
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what
is more friend I he
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friend
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help
them? That why is being them? Thank you for talking the time to read this letter. I
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under stand
that you a busy person and are advice you offer would be
greatly
appreciated. If its
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help
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ful
. I don't be more than happy to
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dicuss
my questions over the phone or coffee. My contact
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details
can
be found
at the
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end
of this letter. Thank you
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very
much Yours
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fouth
fully
Name:
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MirsaidSurname
:
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Ibrohimov
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IELTS letter APLOGY FOR LAST BOOK IN THE SCHOOL

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
137 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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