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You and your friend, Jerry, have tickets for a movie at the weekend, but now you cannot go.

You and your friend, Jerry, have tickets for a movie at the weekend, but now you cannot go. 6KbD3
Hello, my dear Jerry. How are you? I know that we have to go to the cinema at the weekend. But, i apologize to you, i really wanted to go with you but i cannot this time. The only reason is, i have got a very essential and additional math exam this weekend. I must attend it and i am sure you always understand me. Hope you will not be disappointed too. I advise you to invite your other friends to go the match together that the ticket which we bought for me would not be cancelled. Best wishes!
Hello, my dear Jerry.

How are you? I know that we
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have to
go to the cinema
The phrase 'at the weekend' is a British English expression, which is used the same way as "on the weekend" in American English.
at the weekend
.
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But
,
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i
apologize to you,
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i
really
wanted to
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go with
you
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but
Did you mean "I"?
i
cannot this time. The
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only
reason is,
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i
have
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got
a
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very
essential and additional math exam this weekend. I
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must
attend it and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am sure you always understand me. Hope you will not
be disappointed
too. I advise you to invite your other friends to go the match together that the ticket which we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
for me would not
be cancelled
. Best wishes!
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IELTS letter You and your friend, Jerry, have tickets for a movie at the weekend, but now you cannot go.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
99 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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