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Apology letter for last book

Apology letter for last book 1b3Xy
Dear TeachI am writing to apologise for last FIVE GHOST story. I missed the FIVE GHOST story you gave me. I'm very sorry about that. That's what happened. When I got home on Satuday my brother said to me: Can you give me this book. I will give it next week. I asked my brother for my book. Brother: The book said on the table in the hotel. When I saw this plance the book was not there. My brother and I had a neated argument about where the book had gone. It turnet out that my brother had read the whule book and thad is was very intersting and thed he had told his school frends about it. We also said they did not build the book/ I asked my little brouther sung. He said he looked at the fikture in the book and took them to his classmaths. Unfortunataly the book was also a burden is his bag. Then it bnecome clear thad the book was lost. Teacher, ifpassible, can you tell me when and for hov much you bought this book
Dear
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TeachI
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writing to
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apologise
for last FIVE GHOST story. I missed the FIVE GHOST story you gave me. I'm
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very
sorry about that. That's what happened. When I
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got
home on
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Satuday
my
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brother
said to me: Can you give me this
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book
. I will give it
next
week. I asked my
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brother
for my
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book
.
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Brother
: The
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book
said on the table in the hotel.
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When
I
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saw
this
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plance
the
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book
was not there. My
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brother
and I had a
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neated
argument about where the
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book
had gone. It
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turnet
out that my
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brother
had read the
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whule
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book
and
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thad
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is
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was
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very
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intersting
and
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thed
he had
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told
his school
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frends
about it. We
also
said they did not build the book/ I asked my
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little
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brouther
sung. He said he looked at the
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fikture
in the
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book
and took them to his
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classmaths
.
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Unfortunataly
the
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book
was
also
a burden is his bag. Then it
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bnecome
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clear
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thad
the
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book
was lost
. Teacher,
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ifpassible
, can you
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tell
me when and for
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hov
much you
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bought
this
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book
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IELTS letter Apology letter for last book

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
183 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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