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I am very happy to hear that you will visit Ha Noi for the first time and I would like to introduce some interesting information about Ha Noi.

I am very happy to hear that you will visit Ha Noi for the first time and I would like to introduce some interesting information about Ha Noi. Ow7Q7
Dear Kenzo, I am very happy to hear that you will visit Ha Noi for the first time and I would like to introduce some interesting information about Ha Noi. There are a lot of hotels, guesthouses and luxury hotels. There is certainly lots to do there as it is the capital of Vietnam. There are many famous places in Ha Noi including the Ho Chi Minh mausoleum, Hoan Kiem lake, Ba Vi national park and so on and If you like going out in the evening, there are a lot of good restaurants and bars. Also, there are a whole range of specialties namely: Bun Cha, Pho, Nem Ran, . . . I hope you will enjoy your trip in Ha Noi Best regard
Dear
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I am
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happy to hear that you will visit Ha
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Noi
for the
first
time and I would like to introduce
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interesting information about Ha
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Noi
.

There are
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a lot of
hotels, guesthouses and luxury hotels.

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lots to do there as it is the capital of Vietnam.
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are
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places in Ha
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including the Ho Chi Minh mausoleum,
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Hoan
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lake, Ba Vi national park and
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on and If you like going out in the evening, there are
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namely
: Bun
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Cha
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Pho
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I hope you will enjoy your trip in Ha
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Best regard
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IELTS letter I am very happy to hear that you will visit Ha Noi for the first time and I would like to introduce some interesting information about Ha Noi.

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124 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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